《2025年5年中考3年模拟九年级英语全一册译林版》

Dear Mr. Wu,
I am writing to recommend Simon as the new chairperson of our English Club.First, Simon is a confident and helpful person. He always offers assistance to club members and encourages everyone to take part in club activities. Second, Simon has a unique hobby of using colors to change moods, so he's able to create a positive atmosphere during club meetings. In addition, he has some changes now. In the past, Simon mainly focused on playing football, but now he has learned to achieve a balance between work and play. I believe Simon's qualities and dedication can make him an ideal candidate for the position.
Yours,
Li Hua

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Dear Mr. Wu,
I am writing to recommend Simon as the new chairperson of our English Club.
First, Simon is a confident and helpful person. He always offers assistance to club members and encourages everyone to^2 take part in club activities. Second^1, Simon has a unique hobby of using colors to change moods, so he's able to create a positive atmosphere^3 during club meetings. In addition^1, he has some changes now. In the past, Simon mainly focused on playing football, but now he has learned to achieve a balance between work and play.$
I believe Simon's qualities and dedication can make him an ideal candidate^3 for the position^4.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点评析
①使用逻辑词语 first、second、in addition 使内容条理清晰。
②使用 encourage sb. to do sth. (鼓励某人做某事)结构来表现主人公的品质,使文章更有说服力。
③使用高级表达来提升文章水准。
④使用宾语从句,表达了对 Simon 能胜任这个职位的信心,使文章紧扣主题。