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刷写作
建议用时 30 分钟
答案 D51
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1. 样式______
2. 时装业______
3. 般配______
4. 传统的______
5. 取决于______
6. 例如______
7. 突出;显眼______
8. 由……制成______
二、佳句仿写
9. 【教材原句】Some people... but other people look nice in cool colours, such as green, blue and purple. (such as)
→仿写:这个商店里有许多服装,如外套、衬衫、裤子等。______
10. 【教材原句】Qipao are usually made of silk, and they feel smooth and soft. (be made of)
→仿写:这些酒瓶是用玻璃做的。______
11. 【教材原句】The jacket is not too long or too large... (not... or...)
→仿写:他既没有外套,也没有领带。______
第2阶 经典范文模版
I would like to say something about my fashion design (交代事由). Here is my design for a coat, a pair of trousers, a T-shirt, a tie and a pair of shoes. (引出下文)
The coat is short. It is blue and it is made of cotton. I think it looks good on me. ①The trousers are also made of cotton. They are white because I think white matches any other colour. ②The T-shirt is purple and is made of silk. It feels comfortable. ③The tie is red and yellow. It looks colourful. ④There is also a pair of shoes. They are black, and they are made of leather. ⑤(从不同方面介绍设计)
I think my fashion design is cool. (表达情感及观点) What do think of it?
第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025江苏徐州质检]学校英语网站正在举行以“Fashionable Clothes”为题的征文比赛,请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文向网站投稿。
1. What kinds of clothes do you think are in fashion now?
2. Why do you think so? (colour, style, material...)
...
具体要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
(2)词数80左右;
(3)内容须涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Fashionable Clothes______
第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一、三人称为主
内容要点:时装的颜色、样式、材料等
写作框架:
第一步 开篇点题,表明自己的观点。
第二步 详细说明理由。
第三步 说明不同的人有不同的看法。
第二步 列


第4阶 实战演练
你校的Fashion Club下周将举办一场时装秀。老师号召有意愿参加时装秀的同学先提交自己的设计以及相关介绍。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文介绍自己小组的设计。
Our designs for the fashion show
My design:dress,blue,cotton,soft and comfortable;a little long
Linda's design:T-shirt,white,cotton,match any colour;sports shoes,black,leather,light and comfortable
写作要求:
(1)包含提示,内容充实;
(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)不少于70词,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
We'll have a fashion show next week. And the teacher asks us to design some clothes and shoes. Here are our designs for the fashion show.______
建议用时 30 分钟
答案 D51
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1. 样式______
2. 时装业______
3. 般配______
4. 传统的______
5. 取决于______
6. 例如______
7. 突出;显眼______
8. 由……制成______
二、佳句仿写
9. 【教材原句】Some people... but other people look nice in cool colours, such as green, blue and purple. (such as)
→仿写:这个商店里有许多服装,如外套、衬衫、裤子等。______
10. 【教材原句】Qipao are usually made of silk, and they feel smooth and soft. (be made of)
→仿写:这些酒瓶是用玻璃做的。______
11. 【教材原句】The jacket is not too long or too large... (not... or...)
→仿写:他既没有外套,也没有领带。______
第2阶 经典范文模版
I would like to say something about my fashion design (交代事由). Here is my design for a coat, a pair of trousers, a T-shirt, a tie and a pair of shoes. (引出下文)
The coat is short. It is blue and it is made of cotton. I think it looks good on me. ①The trousers are also made of cotton. They are white because I think white matches any other colour. ②The T-shirt is purple and is made of silk. It feels comfortable. ③The tie is red and yellow. It looks colourful. ④There is also a pair of shoes. They are black, and they are made of leather. ⑤(从不同方面介绍设计)
I think my fashion design is cool. (表达情感及观点) What do think of it?
第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025江苏徐州质检]学校英语网站正在举行以“Fashionable Clothes”为题的征文比赛,请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文向网站投稿。
1. What kinds of clothes do you think are in fashion now?
2. Why do you think so? (colour, style, material...)
...
具体要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
(2)词数80左右;
(3)内容须涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Fashionable Clothes______
第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一、三人称为主
内容要点:时装的颜色、样式、材料等
写作框架:
第一步 开篇点题,表明自己的观点。
第二步 详细说明理由。
第三步 说明不同的人有不同的看法。
第二步 列
第4阶 实战演练
你校的Fashion Club下周将举办一场时装秀。老师号召有意愿参加时装秀的同学先提交自己的设计以及相关介绍。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文介绍自己小组的设计。
Our designs for the fashion show
My design:dress,blue,cotton,soft and comfortable;a little long
Linda's design:T-shirt,white,cotton,match any colour;sports shoes,black,leather,light and comfortable
写作要求:
(1)包含提示,内容充实;
(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)不少于70词,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
We'll have a fashion show next week. And the teacher asks us to design some clothes and shoes. Here are our designs for the fashion show.______
答案:
1. style 2. fashion 3. match 4. traditional 5. depend on 6. such as/for example 7. stand out 8. be made of/be made from
@@9. There are many clothes in the shop, such as coats, shirts, trousers and so on. 10. These wine bottles are made of glass. 11. He doesn't have a coat or a tie.
@@Look! My design is a beautiful dress. The colour of it is blue. The dress is made of cotton, so it is both soft and comfortable. The dress is a little long, so it will make the girl wearing it look tall and slim. Here are Linda's designs—a T-shirt and a pair of sports shoes. The T-shirt is white, so it can match any colour. It's made of cotton. The black sports shoes are made of leather. They are light and comfortable to wear. These are our designs. Hope that you like them.
@@9. There are many clothes in the shop, such as coats, shirts, trousers and so on. 10. These wine bottles are made of glass. 11. He doesn't have a coat or a tie.
@@Look! My design is a beautiful dress. The colour of it is blue. The dress is made of cotton, so it is both soft and comfortable. The dress is a little long, so it will make the girl wearing it look tall and slim. Here are Linda's designs—a T-shirt and a pair of sports shoes. The T-shirt is white, so it can match any colour. It's made of cotton. The black sports shoes are made of leather. They are light and comfortable to wear. These are our designs. Hope that you like them.
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