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刷写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1. 变化 ______ 2. 梦想 ______
3. 成员 ______ 4. 技能 ______
5. 各种各样的 ______
6. 计划做某事 ______
7. 实现;成为现实 ______
8. 在未来 ______
二、佳句仿写
9. 【教材原句】It helps me keep fit. (help sb do sth)
→ 仿写:它能帮助我获得很多技能。______
10. 【教材原句】It makes me feel happy. (make sb/sth do sth)
→ 仿写:努力学习能使我们的梦想成真。______
11. 【教材原句】I like science, so I'm interested in the Robot Club. (be interested in)
→ 仿写:如果你对某件事感兴趣,你就去做。______
第2阶 经典范文模版
My favourite sport
My name is Tom (介绍姓名). I love sport (介绍爱好) very much and I think it is good for us to do sport (介绍运动的好处). My favourite sport is basketball (介绍最喜欢的运动). I am a member of our school basketball team. I often play basketball with my friends after school (介绍运动的时间和参与者). We also talk about basketball and watch basketball matches on TV.
Ruio is my favourite basketball player (介绍自己的偶像). He is my hero. I hope I can be a basketball player like him when I grow up (对未来的展望).
第3阶 高分范文赏析
在繁忙而充实的学习之余,学生还应该拥有健康的爱好(如运动、绘画、读书等)。请选择一项你的爱好,以“______ makes my life more colourful”为题写一篇短文。
要点:1. What's your hobby?
2. How do you develop this hobby?
3. What can you learn from your hobby?
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
2. 语义连贯,层次清楚,书写规范,80 词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数。
______ makes my life more colourful
It's important to take up some hobbies in life.______
第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
人 称:第一、三人称
内容要点:爱好、培养过程、收获等
写作框架:
开篇点题 Everyone has their own hobby and so do I. People have different hobbies and mine is...
详细介绍该爱好的培养过程、收获和感受 At first, I enjoyed... especially... When I... I decided to... I like... because I get a lot from it. I have not only... but also... My hobby has brought me happiness and success.
总 结... makes my life more colourful. I really enjoy it. I hope you can have a try. You will find a new world. I hope we can all find our own hobby and enjoy ourselves.
第二步 列

高分范文
Painting makes my life more colourful
It's important to take up some hobbies in life. Painting is my hobby that makes my life more colourful.
At first, I enjoyed visiting museums, especially art museums. I was deeply interested in learning about the great paintings. Then I took the painting classes. The teachers taught me how to design the whole painting and encouraged me. The classmates were friendly and helped me a lot. I have not only made new friends, but also built my confidence.
Painting makes my life more colourful. I really enjoy it.
名师点评
①be interested in doing sth 是第一单元所学表达,做到了学以致用;
②At first、Then 等词语的运用使文章层次分明;
③“not only... but also...”结构说明绘画这一爱好带给作者的益处,并且丰富了文章的句式。
这篇习作语言流畅,层次分明,条理清晰,要点齐全,详细介绍了自己培养绘画这一爱好的过程,并说明了自己的收获和感受。
第4阶 实战演练
[2025 江苏扬州期中]“社”想未来,“团”聚精彩。今年学校开办各种社团,丰富中学生课余生活,如 Reading Club、Travelling Club、DIY Club,以此彰显多样的校园风采。假设你是张华,想申请加入其中的一个俱乐部,请根据以下问题给王老师写一封英语申请信。
1. What are you like? (looks, personalities, hobbies...)
2. Which club would you like to join? (only one)
3. Why would you like to join the club? (reason, hope, plan...)
注意事项:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Dear Miss Wang,
I'm Zhang Hua in Grade 7. ______
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1. 变化 ______ 2. 梦想 ______
3. 成员 ______ 4. 技能 ______
5. 各种各样的 ______
6. 计划做某事 ______
7. 实现;成为现实 ______
8. 在未来 ______
二、佳句仿写
9. 【教材原句】It helps me keep fit. (help sb do sth)
→ 仿写:它能帮助我获得很多技能。______
10. 【教材原句】It makes me feel happy. (make sb/sth do sth)
→ 仿写:努力学习能使我们的梦想成真。______
11. 【教材原句】I like science, so I'm interested in the Robot Club. (be interested in)
→ 仿写:如果你对某件事感兴趣,你就去做。______
第2阶 经典范文模版
My favourite sport
My name is Tom (介绍姓名). I love sport (介绍爱好) very much and I think it is good for us to do sport (介绍运动的好处). My favourite sport is basketball (介绍最喜欢的运动). I am a member of our school basketball team. I often play basketball with my friends after school (介绍运动的时间和参与者). We also talk about basketball and watch basketball matches on TV.
Ruio is my favourite basketball player (介绍自己的偶像). He is my hero. I hope I can be a basketball player like him when I grow up (对未来的展望).
第3阶 高分范文赏析
在繁忙而充实的学习之余,学生还应该拥有健康的爱好(如运动、绘画、读书等)。请选择一项你的爱好,以“______ makes my life more colourful”为题写一篇短文。
要点:1. What's your hobby?
2. How do you develop this hobby?
3. What can you learn from your hobby?
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
2. 语义连贯,层次清楚,书写规范,80 词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数。
______ makes my life more colourful
It's important to take up some hobbies in life.______
第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
人 称:第一、三人称
内容要点:爱好、培养过程、收获等
写作框架:
开篇点题 Everyone has their own hobby and so do I. People have different hobbies and mine is...
详细介绍该爱好的培养过程、收获和感受 At first, I enjoyed... especially... When I... I decided to... I like... because I get a lot from it. I have not only... but also... My hobby has brought me happiness and success.
总 结... makes my life more colourful. I really enjoy it. I hope you can have a try. You will find a new world. I hope we can all find our own hobby and enjoy ourselves.
第二步 列
高分范文
Painting makes my life more colourful
It's important to take up some hobbies in life. Painting is my hobby that makes my life more colourful.
At first, I enjoyed visiting museums, especially art museums. I was deeply interested in learning about the great paintings. Then I took the painting classes. The teachers taught me how to design the whole painting and encouraged me. The classmates were friendly and helped me a lot. I have not only made new friends, but also built my confidence.
Painting makes my life more colourful. I really enjoy it.
名师点评
①be interested in doing sth 是第一单元所学表达,做到了学以致用;
②At first、Then 等词语的运用使文章层次分明;
③“not only... but also...”结构说明绘画这一爱好带给作者的益处,并且丰富了文章的句式。
这篇习作语言流畅,层次分明,条理清晰,要点齐全,详细介绍了自己培养绘画这一爱好的过程,并说明了自己的收获和感受。
第4阶 实战演练
[2025 江苏扬州期中]“社”想未来,“团”聚精彩。今年学校开办各种社团,丰富中学生课余生活,如 Reading Club、Travelling Club、DIY Club,以此彰显多样的校园风采。假设你是张华,想申请加入其中的一个俱乐部,请根据以下问题给王老师写一封英语申请信。
1. What are you like? (looks, personalities, hobbies...)
2. Which club would you like to join? (only one)
3. Why would you like to join the club? (reason, hope, plan...)
注意事项:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Dear Miss Wang,
I'm Zhang Hua in Grade 7. ______
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
答案:
第1阶
一. 1. change 2. dream 3. member 4. skill 5. all kinds of 6. plan to do sth 7. come true 8. in the future
二. 9. It can help me get many/lots of/a lot of skills. 10. Studying/Working hard can make our dreams come true. 11. If you are interested in something, just do it.
第4阶
Dear Miss Wang, I'm Zhang Hua in Grade 7. I am an outgoing and friendly person with a passion for creativity.In my free time, I enjoy drawing and making handicrafts. So I would like to join the DIY Club. I have always been fascinated by the idea of creating something unique with my own hands. Joining the DIY Club will allow me to learn new skills, share my ideas with others, and make new friends who have similar interests. I hope to contribute my creative ideas and collaborate with other members to create wonderful projects.
一. 1. change 2. dream 3. member 4. skill 5. all kinds of 6. plan to do sth 7. come true 8. in the future
二. 9. It can help me get many/lots of/a lot of skills. 10. Studying/Working hard can make our dreams come true. 11. If you are interested in something, just do it.
第4阶
Dear Miss Wang, I'm Zhang Hua in Grade 7. I am an outgoing and friendly person with a passion for creativity.In my free time, I enjoy drawing and making handicrafts. So I would like to join the DIY Club. I have always been fascinated by the idea of creating something unique with my own hands. Joining the DIY Club will allow me to learn new skills, share my ideas with others, and make new friends who have similar interests. I hope to contribute my creative ideas and collaborate with other members to create wonderful projects.
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