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刷写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1. 业余爱好 ______
2. 友好的 ______
3. 苗条的 ______
4. 有礼貌的 ______
5. 互相 ______
6. 满是……的 ______
7. 擅长 ______
8. 在周末 ______
二、佳句仿写
9. 【教材原句】He is good at sport. (be good at)
→仿写:丹尼尔擅长打篮球。______
10. 【教材原句】He is smart and always ready to help others. (be ready to)
→仿写:她很友善,总是乐于在英语方面帮助我。______
11. 【教材原句】I enjoy playing Chinese chess and ping-pong. (enjoy doing sth)
→ 仿写:我的姐姐喜欢跳舞和听音乐。______
12. 【教材原句】I am happy to make friends with them. (make friends with)
→仿写:他们很高兴能与交流生们交朋友。______
第2阶 经典范文模版
Hi, everyone. I am Daniel (介绍姓名). I am very happy (表达情绪) to be your classmate. Now I will tell you something about myself.
I am 13 years old (介绍年龄). I am from the UN (来自某地). I'm tall and strong with short hair (介绍外貌). I wear a pair of glasses (介绍外貌). I like Chinese and Art best (介绍喜好). I'm interested in Maths (介绍兴趣), but I'm not good at it. I am helpful and always ready to help others (介绍性格). My hobbies are reading, drawing and playing basketball (介绍爱好).
I hope all of us can be good friends (表达希望).
第3阶 高分范文赏析
请根据下表提供的信息,以“This is me!”为题,用英语做自我介绍。70词左右。
| Name | Sandy | Age | 13 |
| Living place | Beijing | School | Sunshine Middle School |
| Appearance(外貌) | tall and slim; long black hair; wear glasses |
| Hobbies | listening to music and playing badminton |
| Good at | drawing | Not good at | swimming |
This is me!______
第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:姓名、年龄、居住地、学校、外貌、业余爱好、擅长和不擅长的事
写作框架:
| This is me! | 第一部分 | Name |
| | | Age |
| | | Living place |
| | | School |
| | 第二部分 | Appearance |
| | | Hobbies |
| | | Good at/Not good at |
| | 总结 | My teachers and classmates all like me. |
第二步 列

高分范文
This is me!
My name is Sandy. I am 13 years old. I live with my family in Beijing now. I study at Sunshine Middle School.
I'm tall and slim. I have long black hair with a pair of glasses. I enjoy listening to music. I listen to CDs at the weekend. I also like playing badminton. I usually play badminton with my friends after school. I am good at drawing, but I am not good at swimming.
I have lots of friends at school. I'm very nice to everyone. My teachers and classmates all like me.
名师点评
①with a pair of glasses 作状语,既生动说明人物形象,又增加文章的亮点;
②but 连接的并列句,介绍了作者擅长与不擅长的事,丰富了文章的句式;
③文章最后一段体现出作者与老师和同学之间真诚的情谊。
这篇习作要点齐全,语言流畅,全面介绍了自己的相关情况。文中的 with a pair of glasses、enjoy listening to music、at the weekend、after school、be good at 和 be nice to 等显示出作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些短语也是文章的亮点。
第4阶 实战演练
[2025 江苏泰州质检]请根据表格内的信息写一篇英语短文,向你的同学介绍你的加拿大朋友 Tomas。要点如下:
| 基本信息 | 1. 中文名:杜福;年龄:13;国籍:加拿大(Canada);现居住地:泰州;学校和班级:月光中学(Moonlight Middle School)七年级二班;2. 短发,不戴眼镜,个头小但是强壮有力。 |
| 爱好、特长 | 1. 喜欢所有学科,学习用功,最喜欢……科目,因为……2. 擅长运动,……是他的最爱,他认为运动……3. 热爱阅读,因为……,每周去一次图书馆。 |
| 理想 | 他希望……(至少一点) |
要求:1. 词数 80 左右;2. 要点中省略号部分要求适当发挥;3. 书写美观,段落清晰;4. 标点正确,注意细节。
Hello, everyone! This is my good friend Tomas. ______
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1. 业余爱好 ______
2. 友好的 ______
3. 苗条的 ______
4. 有礼貌的 ______
5. 互相 ______
6. 满是……的 ______
7. 擅长 ______
8. 在周末 ______
二、佳句仿写
9. 【教材原句】He is good at sport. (be good at)
→仿写:丹尼尔擅长打篮球。______
10. 【教材原句】He is smart and always ready to help others. (be ready to)
→仿写:她很友善,总是乐于在英语方面帮助我。______
11. 【教材原句】I enjoy playing Chinese chess and ping-pong. (enjoy doing sth)
→ 仿写:我的姐姐喜欢跳舞和听音乐。______
12. 【教材原句】I am happy to make friends with them. (make friends with)
→仿写:他们很高兴能与交流生们交朋友。______
第2阶 经典范文模版
Hi, everyone. I am Daniel (介绍姓名). I am very happy (表达情绪) to be your classmate. Now I will tell you something about myself.
I am 13 years old (介绍年龄). I am from the UN (来自某地). I'm tall and strong with short hair (介绍外貌). I wear a pair of glasses (介绍外貌). I like Chinese and Art best (介绍喜好). I'm interested in Maths (介绍兴趣), but I'm not good at it. I am helpful and always ready to help others (介绍性格). My hobbies are reading, drawing and playing basketball (介绍爱好).
I hope all of us can be good friends (表达希望).
第3阶 高分范文赏析
请根据下表提供的信息,以“This is me!”为题,用英语做自我介绍。70词左右。
| Name | Sandy | Age | 13 |
| Living place | Beijing | School | Sunshine Middle School |
| Appearance(外貌) | tall and slim; long black hair; wear glasses |
| Hobbies | listening to music and playing badminton |
| Good at | drawing | Not good at | swimming |
This is me!______
第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:姓名、年龄、居住地、学校、外貌、业余爱好、擅长和不擅长的事
写作框架:
| This is me! | 第一部分 | Name |
| | | Age |
| | | Living place |
| | | School |
| | 第二部分 | Appearance |
| | | Hobbies |
| | | Good at/Not good at |
| | 总结 | My teachers and classmates all like me. |
第二步 列
高分范文
This is me!
My name is Sandy. I am 13 years old. I live with my family in Beijing now. I study at Sunshine Middle School.
I'm tall and slim. I have long black hair with a pair of glasses. I enjoy listening to music. I listen to CDs at the weekend. I also like playing badminton. I usually play badminton with my friends after school. I am good at drawing, but I am not good at swimming.
I have lots of friends at school. I'm very nice to everyone. My teachers and classmates all like me.
名师点评
①with a pair of glasses 作状语,既生动说明人物形象,又增加文章的亮点;
②but 连接的并列句,介绍了作者擅长与不擅长的事,丰富了文章的句式;
③文章最后一段体现出作者与老师和同学之间真诚的情谊。
这篇习作要点齐全,语言流畅,全面介绍了自己的相关情况。文中的 with a pair of glasses、enjoy listening to music、at the weekend、after school、be good at 和 be nice to 等显示出作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些短语也是文章的亮点。
第4阶 实战演练
[2025 江苏泰州质检]请根据表格内的信息写一篇英语短文,向你的同学介绍你的加拿大朋友 Tomas。要点如下:
| 基本信息 | 1. 中文名:杜福;年龄:13;国籍:加拿大(Canada);现居住地:泰州;学校和班级:月光中学(Moonlight Middle School)七年级二班;2. 短发,不戴眼镜,个头小但是强壮有力。 |
| 爱好、特长 | 1. 喜欢所有学科,学习用功,最喜欢……科目,因为……2. 擅长运动,……是他的最爱,他认为运动……3. 热爱阅读,因为……,每周去一次图书馆。 |
| 理想 | 他希望……(至少一点) |
要求:1. 词数 80 左右;2. 要点中省略号部分要求适当发挥;3. 书写美观,段落清晰;4. 标点正确,注意细节。
Hello, everyone! This is my good friend Tomas. ______
答案:
第1阶
一 1. hobby 2. friendly 3. slim 4. polite 5. each other/one another 6. be full of/filled with 7. be good at 8. at/on the weekend/at/on weekends
二 9. Daniel is good at playing basketball. 10. She is kind and always ready to help me with my English. 11. My sister enjoys dancing and listening to music. 12. They are happy to make friends with the exchange students.
第4阶【参考范文】Hello, everyone! This is my good friend Tomas. His Chinese name is Du Fu. He is 13 years old, and he comes from Canada. He lives in Taizhou now. He studies in Class 2, Grade 7 in Moonlight Middle School. He is short but strong. He has short hair and doesn't wear glasses. He likes all subjects and studies hard. His favourite subject is English, because he thinks it is interesting. He is good at sport. He likes playing football best. He thinks doing sport is good for his health. He also likes reading, because reading makes him know more about the world. He goes to the library once a week. He hopes to be an English teacher, because he wants to make more students like English.
一 1. hobby 2. friendly 3. slim 4. polite 5. each other/one another 6. be full of/filled with 7. be good at 8. at/on the weekend/at/on weekends
二 9. Daniel is good at playing basketball. 10. She is kind and always ready to help me with my English. 11. My sister enjoys dancing and listening to music. 12. They are happy to make friends with the exchange students.
第4阶【参考范文】Hello, everyone! This is my good friend Tomas. His Chinese name is Du Fu. He is 13 years old, and he comes from Canada. He lives in Taizhou now. He studies in Class 2, Grade 7 in Moonlight Middle School. He is short but strong. He has short hair and doesn't wear glasses. He likes all subjects and studies hard. His favourite subject is English, because he thinks it is interesting. He is good at sport. He likes playing football best. He thinks doing sport is good for his health. He also likes reading, because reading makes him know more about the world. He goes to the library once a week. He hopes to be an English teacher, because he wants to make more students like English.
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