《2025年一遍过英语必修第一册外研版》

单元话题假定你是李津,最近你的美国朋友Chris在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳,来信寻求你的帮助和建议,请根据以下要点给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 安慰朋友;
2. 提出建议(尊重理解、分享交流等);
3. 表达希望。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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答案： 写作思路
一审 审清体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——信件
主题：向朋友提供解决和父母之间矛盾的建议
二定 确定时态和人称
时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主，第二、第三人称为辅
三明确 明确写作要点
1.安慰朋友，表示自己以前也有类似经历。
2.提出建议：学会换位思考，及时沟通。
3.表达希望和美好祝愿。
【范文赏读】
Dear Chris,
I am sorry to hear about your communication problems with your parents, but I know how you feel since I've had similar experience before. Here are my suggestions.
since引导的原因状语从句
First, let's put ourselves in their shoes. Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes. However, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart, not a solution. Therefore, tell them about the difference and share your ideas.
when引导的时间状语从句
I hope the advice will help and that things can get better soon.
两个并列的宾语从句，第二个从句中的连接词that不能省略
Yours,
Li Jin

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
          [2024四川省雅安中学高一上月考]In a quiet suburb, there lived a high school student named Liam. He was the son of two scientists. Naturally, everyone thought Liam would follow in his parents' footsteps and pursue a career in science to become a scientist. However, Liam put his heart into something entirely different — he was passionate about literature and writing.
           Each morning, Liam would wake up to hear his parents discuss the latest scientific discoveries and development over breakfast. One particular morning, Liam was upset, as the task of selecting his high school courses weighed heavily on him. He knew his parents would expect him to fill his schedule with science and math classes and engage in work related to science. At breakfast, Liam's mother noticed his sadness and asked, " Is everything alright, Liam?" Liam hesitated(犹豫) but then replied, " I'm just thinking about my course selection for next semester." His father cut in, " You should consider more science courses. They will prepare you for a great career in science, just like us."
           Throughout the day, the thought of disappointing his parents troubled Liam. He loved and respected them but hesitated between their expectations and his own ambition. That afternoon, Liam met his best friend, Sam, at their favorite cafe. " Liam, you seem worried. What's on your mind?" Sam asked. Liam admitted, " I'm struggling with course selection. My parents want me to focus on science, but I really want to take more literature and writing classes." Sam listened carefully and comforted him, " Liam, it's important to follow your passion. Maybe you should talk to your parents about what you really want. They might be more understanding than you think."
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1:
Encouraged by Sam's words, Liam decided to have an honest conversation with his parents that night.
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Paragraph 2:
To his surprise, their expressions softened after they heard his words.
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答案： 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了青少年Liam在追求个人志向与满足父母期望之间寻求平衡的过程。
Para.1首句 被Sam的话鼓舞，Liam决定当晚和父母开诚布公地谈一谈。
Para.1续写 由续写第一段首句可知，续写第一段可描写Liam告诉父母他内心的想法和决心以及他说服父母的过程。
Para.2首句 令他吃惊的是，他们听了他的话后，表情变得温和了。
Para.2续写 由续写第二段首句可知，续写第二段可描写Liam的父母听完Liam的话后支持他的选择。
由续写第二段首句中的"To his surprise"可知，续写第一段应以Liam的心理活动结尾，即Liam的内心是没抱太大成功的希望的。
续写的结尾应是积极向上的。
续写框架
词汇激活
行为类
①充分利用：make the best use of/take full advantage of/make the most of
②信任：believe in/trust/have confidence in
情绪类
①绝望地：hopelessly/in despair
②令某人惊讶的是：to one's surprise/amazement
One possible version
Paragraph 1:
Encouraged by Sam's words, Liam decided to have an honest conversation with his parents that night. Over dinner, he bravely expressed his love for literature and his desire to explore that field in high school. He also made a promise to them that he would make the best use of every minute to learn and shared his plans and goals with them to show his determination. After that, he dropped his eyes hopelessly with the thought that they wouldn't agree.
that引导的同位语从句 不定式短语作目的状语 that引导的同位语从句
Paragraph 2:
To his surprise, their expressions softened after they heard his words. Liam's mother reached out and took his hand, saying, "Liam, we only want to do what's best for you. If literature is truly your dream, we will support you." His father nodded, also impressed by his son's determination. "Liam, you have always been a responsible and hardworking individual. We believe in your ability to succeed, whether in science or in the arts," he said. Liam was greatly touched by what they had said and hugged them tightly.
过去分词短语作状语 what引导的宾语从句
【语料积累】
亮点短语
1.follow in one's footsteps步某人的后尘，继承某人(尤指家人)的事业
2.put one's heart into...一心扑在……上，对……全力以赴
3.weigh on sb.加重……的心理负担，使(某人)忧虑/烦恼
4.cut in插嘴，打断别人说话
亮点句式
1.Throughout the day, the thought of disappointing his parents troubled Liam. 整整一天，(自己会)让父母失望的想法一直困扰着Liam。
2.After that, he dropped his eyes hopelessly with the thought that they wouldn't agree. 之后，他绝望地垂下眼睛，认为他们不会同意。