Question

提示：我们生活在一个安宁的社会，父母每天为我们准备好吃的和穿的，老师每天为我们传授知识，朋友一直在给予我们支持与鼓励。这一切，我们看在眼里，也记在心里。在毕业之际，请以“Thanks”为题，用英语写一篇文章,表达你的感恩之情。

要求：1．根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；

2．语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁;

3．文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4．书面表达必须写在答题卷上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Mom, thank you for so many years of my education and training, ignorance of the past, I always make you angry, but now I grow up, self-reliance, and I feel that I should not be so naive。I will work hard at all the subjects.I will not live up to your expectations! I'm really grateful to my mother to take care of me. When I was sick, my mother is always did her best to take care of me. When I failed the examination, my mother also encouraged me to refresh, not to become disheartened. Really grateful to what my mother has done.I know it was my mother's help that made me learned how to perform well in my life. I really would like to thank my mother. I think in this world, I love you more than anyone.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，以“Thanks”为题，用英语写一篇文章,表达你的感恩之情。由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，根据要求可知本句主要是过去时态，人称是第一人称。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: thank you for so many years of my education and training谢谢你这么多年对我的教育和培养；I will work hard at all the subjects. 我会努力学习所有的科目；When I failed the examination, my mother also encouraged me to refresh, not to become disheartened. 当我考试不及格，妈妈也鼓励我振作，不要灰心等等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提示性作文。