Question

17．现在是晚上8点，请根据所给信息描述一下Tom一家的活动情况．
Mother：watch TV； Father：read a book   Tom：do homework
Mary：play computer games  Grandmother：clean the room．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Look!Tom is doing his homework你看，汤姆在做作业．
look表示提醒别人注意；现在进行时"be doing"的应用．
【高分句型二】
Where is his sister，Mary？他的姐姐玛丽在哪里．
特殊疑问句的使用．

解答 It's eight o'clock in the evening．What are Tom's family doing？Look!Tom is doing his homework （汤姆在做作业）．【高分句型一】His father is reading a book!His mother is watching TV．His grandmother is cleaning the room．（爸爸和妈妈，奶奶在做什么）Where is his sister，Mary？【高分句型二】Oh，she is playing computer games．（玛丽在玩电脑）

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